They'Ve Spoilt Everything

Our Land used to be peaceful and fertile
 Then was our flag rich in white and yoked in green
 Thus did the Bees play with the Cows without stings
 Like brothers would their sisters without strings
 and soaked our children with milk and honey

Our People used to be lovely and warm
Young men and women moved freely with uncovered danglers
We were naked but not nude nor ashamed
Though unrefined yet not rude nor untamed
Moderately burdened by the bliss of our ignorance

Then came the white men
We tasted of their Eden fruit and our eyes opened
Alas, we saw the greener lawn on the other side
Little by little loyalty began to drift and slide
We drove them away too early out of greed

So, your fathers arose to save the day
Here we are worse off than when we first began
They being keen to lead and impatient to learn
Determined to achieve the lusts they yearn
set on a senseless sail amidst the fog


Our land is now loathsome and sterile
Playgrounds invaded by mosquitoes and church rats
daily drowning our children in their pool of blood
A body’s priceless price for a visionless head
Take this message to your fathers that I said
They've spoilt everything.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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