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They Write Themselves Up

Adjectives plunk themselves down in two’s and threes. I watch them gather, peeking from behind solid noun trees. The blank page delights me, incites me, highlights me. I try to catch up, but they are everywhere I did not see. Where to begin? I wonder, but they are not waiting for me. They are cleverly organizing themselves into a big company. An army now, they march along leaving their tracks. I pick up the pen, and one coughs “Here comes one of the hacks.” This makes me cringe, for I thought I ought to be in charge. Who does she think she is? An admiral or a convoluted sarge? The verbs began to gather and start whistling at me now. Starting their own sentences without my help. Meow!

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Date: 10/4/2021 8:04:00 PM
Very interesting, indeed. Adjectives sometimes run away with me, but I do love my verbals...verbals, not gerbils! And I do get a little bit tired of verbs that hang around and start repeating themselves every time I start a poem!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/5/2021 9:08:00 PM
I get tired of adverbs that throw themselves down on pages without permission.

Book: Shattered Sighs