They Will Never Find Me

Unlikely anyone would look for me
But if they did I'd not be hard to see
Catching my attention might be harder
As it is seldom with it's bodied partner
One possibly could find me in a book
Distracting me might garner you a look
If looking from a sub under the sea
The bottom is the place where I will be
Go into outer space and search the stars
My secret hang out is the planet Mars
If music is a place where you elope
I'll be hanging on the passing notes
Since time has now become my enemy
I often hide inside a memory
Should you see me sitting near a stream
You'll find I have withdrawn into a dream
To say that you have found me might be true
But truth be told, you only have these clues


   March 13 2016  by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 7/21/2017 3:32:00 PM
A great, grand poem, Daniel. An innerspace mystery wrapped in an enigma told in your own cool, cryptic matter-of-fact Philip Marlowe poetic detective license style. You sure know how to weave those words, brother. Solid gold fave. Love and peace always.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/21/2017 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, Freddie. Glad you enjoyed it:)
Date: 4/28/2016 12:36:00 AM
Awesome win Daniel,,,PD
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Date: 4/20/2016 10:34:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Daniel..
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Date: 4/20/2016 2:12:00 AM
I'm glad we've found you hiding out on Poetry Soup Daniel:-) :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/15/2016 7:23:00 PM
Very nice, Daniel. I enjoyed your poem. Some wonderful places for you to hide! Best wishes for the contest.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/15/2016 7:26:00 PM
Ms. Sandra I don't have to hide, how can anybody find me when I don't even know where I am? :):) Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Peace dear lady:)
Date: 3/15/2016 1:29:00 PM
So you are all around. Nice piece. Wishing best for the contest. Anisha D
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/15/2016 1:43:00 PM
Technically I am here but my mind is everywhere. Same thing right? Thank you for stopping by. Now I'm confused, I don't even know where I am. Peace young lady:)
Date: 3/13/2016 5:43:00 PM
In truth, it is YOU who has cheered ME up tonight Daniel. To take one's mind of one's self helps a lot, I am sure you agree. Thank you.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/13/2016 5:46:00 PM
I am always just a click away my sweet friend. I'd be willing to bet I could make you laugh any time. You are so full of life. Peace dear friend:)
Date: 3/13/2016 5:25:00 PM
Let's elope to The Ballroom of Romance Daniel. Or let's play hide and seek among the planets. Anything to get your head out of that book. You must be reading your own poems, they are so good.
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/13/2016 5:35:00 PM
Hurry up and get on Facebook. I entertain my multitudes there.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/13/2016 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Jean. Sounds like a date. I don't have to read them. I write them. You are so funny. Thank you for the smiles. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/13/2016 2:46:00 PM
I am in total concord with Mr Frank...Yes I enjoyed your poem also, Daniel. Nicely done...Nicely done. My best regards! :) john
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/13/2016 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, John. I really appreciate your kind support and your time. Peace my friend:)
Date: 3/13/2016 11:59:00 AM
Good Read Daniel.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/13/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thank you, Timothy. I appreciate you reading and commenting. Peace my friend:)
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