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They Wait To Consume You

I see it in you, waning, in broken pieces everyday, That fall away and you let them, Sun soaked diamond chips Like broken chimes on a marble floor. This silence produces an ominous screaming, A falcon circling in the dry desert sun Gliding on imaginary air Screaming the anticipation forth, As the last piece delicately falls He dives to his prey. You cannot hold yourself together. Pray that I will.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/3/2009 12:23:00 PM
very powerful imagery and unique too! Please enter my "Dialect Contest" and let the world here a Canadian voice ..aye? Light & Love
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Date: 7/31/2009 1:08:00 PM
Wow, such an image; reminded me somehow to those survival programs in which people talk about how they managed to survive in the wild and their detailed near-death experiences @.@ wow jojojo indeed a tough picture; thanks a lot for the comments and for the experience =D
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Date: 7/31/2009 11:59:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Robert.I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2009 6:34:00 AM
Hmmmm are we made of rock minerals? "Sun soaked diamond chips" And is the "I" the author or Higher Power? I like the screaming silence! And what IS the falcon gliding on if not air?..more screaming? Ohhh goodness the bird eats diamond chips?..totally mystified YET sometimes that a good thing, a mysterious poet like Poe! Aliens, alien landscapes or the alien landscape of our own mad minds! Light & Love
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Date: 7/30/2009 6:31:00 AM
Very descriptive writing. Keep writing. Sara
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