They Told Me

They told me to never look to the sun.
I tried but from temptation, I couldn't run.
I looked and its heat was binding me.
I looked and its light was blinding me.

They told me to never climb up the oak.
But deep within me, curiosity awoke.
I climbed and its leaves were touching me.
I climbed and its limbs were clutching me.

They tell me to never love the devil.
Yet he draws out my soul at an unspoken level.
I love and his voice is teasing me.
I love and his eyes are freezing me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Budd Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 2:04 PM
I absolutely love this. I love how you kind of proved how it all was inescapable. Fantastic poem.
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 9:52 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning brynne. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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