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They Smiled Eye To Eye

THEY SMILED EYE TO EYE

                                         They smiled eye to eye
                                   As if they met a millennium after 
                                      Strolling down into the valley

                                             They were silent
                                       Touching each other's arm
                                         Quiet flowed the breeze

                                They saw their images in the blue lake
                            Shy moon slipped behind the curtain of mist
                                      Little ripples met each other 

                               Their steps heard the whisper of wind
                                       And stopped short to listen
                                       What she said to the world

                               The road met with rambling forest paths
                                       They stopped near a grove
                                     And kissed each other goodbye
                                      A baby bird cried out in dream.




 © Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty 18 September, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/12/2014 9:55:00 PM
This is a gem Rajat. Enjoyed reading this beauty this morning.. hope your week is a good one so far..
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/12/2014 11:36:00 PM
Thank you Wilma for visiting my page. It's a pleasure. Love xxxxx RAJAT
Date: 9/20/2014 1:39:00 PM
I agree with our lovely friend Nette here, a sight to behold. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Loved always,my poet friend,bl
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Date: 9/20/2014 9:19:00 AM
Great poem! I especially liked your 4th stanza lines where their steps heard the whisper of wind and stopped short to listen. Strong Images in every line. Your poem put me there and I'm also, listening.
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 9/20/2014 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Darlene for the nice comment. Bless you.
Date: 9/19/2014 3:45:00 PM
a sight to behold... love the last two lines,rajat... best winning wishes.. huggs
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 9/20/2014 9:25:00 AM
I am happy nette for your encouragement. Bless you.
Date: 9/19/2014 11:28:00 AM
Beautiful - and thanks you for your kind words! Welcome to "the soup". Where are you writing from? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 9/19/2014 12:52:00 PM
Thank you as you find my poem beautiful. I am from India. Love Matthew.

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