They Come Out At Night

They come out at night
Frightful creatures knocking doors
Tricking or treating

Distorted faces
Little monsters carrying bags
Eating sweet victims
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bagnall Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 4:50 AM
Giggle ! - nicely put
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 8:33 PM
Love the sweet victims part! If this is for the contest, you need one more "stanza." Heads up! someone called me on that rule too. LUv, Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 6:49 PM
good one...I have got to get on this contest!
Bracken Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Great poem. Very scary. I always got scared at Halloween, Thank you for reading mine as well, Shirley
A  Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 2:42 PM
Enjoyed your Haiku, errie, but enjoyed*luv~SKAT
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 1:39 PM
love it
Neels Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Hmmm I don't like them lol Enjoyed your haiku tonight Sidney..
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