They Caught Me Young

They Caught Me Young


The first cut is a cut so deep-
Internalising this impression
Has made me stir and creep
With invariable precision!

Great Writers caught me young
Whilst an exploring youth.
Leaning on the sublimely tongue
Exorcised my being uncouth!

Teachers, too, were adept or apt
For immersing head in writ
Could I’ve been Boy so warped
Revelling in the pristine wit?!

Dog-eared, thick or slimy books
Thrilling with dramatic fiction
Themes of satire or comic gooks
Scheming tricks or zany diction...

Grand Scribes from my Loam
In a Renaissance of our own
Goaded by creativity did roam
Till their quest was fully blown...

Making a child want to read
Is forcing an ass a spat to drink
To force-read and fill his head
Is making a fool like to think!

Dambudzo, Achebe and Ngugi
(Cherished Internal Hairdresser)
Adorning domes wisdom’s wig
‘Gainst ignorance th’ oppressor.

               *
I’m not like floating dung
Wise men fixed me young!
	
Yet, dome is a half full tin
Striving, more wit to win!

Sharing our minds in Soup
Rewards the entire group!!

               *
A legacy from the great Writers
Left me a Poet punishing self
Perfection that I seek to get
Is a constrictor that squeezes
Choking, popping my eyes out.
I dig gnarled knuckles in hair
Teasing brain a gist to catch.
I goad tired legs to move
Stirrups digging sallow flanks,
To climb hills to dizzy heights,
Cross oceans with itchy brine.
Searching elusive enlightenment
I sing till my voice is so hoarse
To postulate concept in limbo.
The way how I abuse myself
Although I churn solid verse
The Muse will not be amused!

               *
Write from your heart
Follow no map or chart
Art is mercury in shape
Take after the landscape
Liquid Metals that flow
Towards where it is low!

               *

My Mentor simply took me across
Teaching me to be my own boss,
Adult, although in his wit I relish
My own effort I must now cherish!	

JM

26th Oct’ 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/28/2013 2:44:00 PM
Joseph, this is humorous, amazing, lyrical, recondite, abstruse and all the rest, or should I say wrest, for that is what we do. I loved it. Mark
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Date: 10/27/2013 2:30:00 PM
Hi Joseph, A well penned and expressive write my friend.. Ken
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Date: 10/28/2013 2:19:00 AM
Ken! I appreciate your comment. I also enjoy your work. Good Day. Friend, JM
Date: 10/26/2013 8:05:00 AM
You have such an incredible way with words, JM; you never fail to impress me. Very cool and unique :)
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Date: 10/28/2013 2:20:00 AM
Thanks my friend. Your comment is encouraging. I also enjoy your work. Friend, JM
Date: 10/26/2013 7:29:00 AM
what a write Joseph a tribute but also far more an honouring of fine writers excellent pen Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/28/2013 2:23:00 AM
Shadow!! Thanks my Friend. I'm chuffed. I promise to read more and more of your stuff. I get my inspiration from Writers like you. Words scribbled on paper have never let me down. JM
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