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They can't take you

I cry at night wish to have you by my side.. I cry all the time hoping to have you back for myself.. I feel like we can't be together. I feel like they are taking you away from me.. I feel like i never had you in my arms... or my heart.. I feel like you don't exist anymore.. They can't take you! They can't take you away from me.. Or can they?? -Brittany ( thank you for reading :) may you please comment on what you think :) if you comment on any of my poems ill read and comment and rate yours :) hehe a lil bit of bribery )

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Date: 10/30/2011 1:01:00 PM
interesting...mixed emotions in this poem...nice diction..nice settings..this is a well defined poem
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Brittany Andrews
Date: 10/31/2011 10:15:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 10/28/2011 3:11:00 PM
* “That Sounds Like A Lovely Deal I Could Not Allow to Pass My Dear Beautiful Brittany * Now This Truly Does Remind Myself of Some Love Story Such As Romeo & Juliet * Yet Rest Assured That Whatever Is Meant to Be Shall Be So, Let Your Beauties Heart Never Be Troubled * Keep Brushing * Luv * Sarah.” *
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Brittany Andrews
Date: 10/31/2011 10:16:00 AM
Thank you very much :) that means alot to me :)