Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Shape

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                    Don`t kill the beauty when I'm proud with art 
                       Beautiful rose heads in all kinds of colors 
                         I put they in my nicest glass of water 
                               Be my fresh flower bouquet 
                                     Do not throw them 
                                       My broken roses 
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                                               PINK 
                                A BEAUTIFUL DECORATION





09.09.2014
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Sarah Stein January 13, 2016 at 2:54 PM Love this! :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 13, 2016 at 3:03 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Tonyna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lindsay Laurie May 10, 2015 at 9:12 PM G'day Anne Lise... very creative shape poem. Thank you Anne Lise - Lindsay Anne-Lise Andresen May 11, 2015 at 2:53 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Lindsay :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Martin Lochner November 26, 2014 at 4:56 AM a perfect Goddess poem- 7! Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2014 at 4:58 AM - Martin, thanks for the nice visit, "7" and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brittany Larson September 16, 2014 at 1:10 PM This was great :) Very beautiful! Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2014 at 1:35 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Brittany :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish September 14, 2014 at 3:27 PM This is the best I have ever seen from you! Long live Poetry Soup! Best Matthew Anish Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 6:47 PM - To make the day lovely .... I painted some flowers for you, Matthew - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner September 13, 2014 at 11:33 PM Rose heads, art of flesh...You are a resourceful woman Anne, and a very passionate poetess! Love your creativity. Im captivated by " Dont kill the beauty..." thats super meaningful. J.A.B. Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2014 at 5:09 AM - Pick roses of life today,Justin. - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock September 12, 2014 at 11:47 PM Beauty in the flowers and we should enjoy them. Nice artistic look to this poem. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2014 at 5:33 AM - To make the day lovely .... I painted some flowers for you, dear Phyllis - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Posey September 11, 2014 at 5:33 PM Uniquely creative, dearest Anne. It is easy to spot the artistry in a genuine artist.... Love ya ...... Jake Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2014 at 2:37 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, John/Jake :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May September 10, 2014 at 11:09 PM Beautiful write Anne...I love the first line...love Anne-Lise Andresen September 11, 2014 at 3:41 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Joseph :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 10, 2014 at 11:56 AM bunch of roses for you, anne.. lovely ,rainy day here.. hugggs Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2014 at 12:02 PM - Happiness is getting a bouquet from you, Nette - on a sunny day :)))

Juli- Michelle September 10, 2014 at 8:11 AM Lovely shape poem :) I haven't done one in awhile, I might like to try my hand at it again. Much enjoyed! -Juli-Michelle Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2014 at 12:10 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Juli-Michelle :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley September 10, 2014 at 7:55 AM The poem and the flowers are both beautiful my friend. This form would be very hard for me to try. You did so exceptionally well with it! Bravo and a solid 7 given... Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2014 at 12:07 PM - Live in the present, do not wait until tomorrow - Pick roses of life today. - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Robert :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick September 10, 2014 at 6:52 AM Ahh!! Creative..These are not so easy to do..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2014 at 12:04 PM - To live is not enough, Sara.... Sunshine, freedom and a little flower one must have:) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bianca And Gerhard September 10, 2014 at 4:03 AM wonderful Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2014 at 4:07 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Bianca and Gerhard :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso September 9, 2014 at 10:44 PM Very creative! A Champagne glass of flowers, ( thats what I shall choose to believe as I drink to this wonderful poem! ) Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2014 at 3:17 AM - Champagne and flowers! - There is almost nothing that makes life so good :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Arthur :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan September 9, 2014 at 7:04 PM Anne Lise that is so beautiful, in fact so beautiful it brings your poem to life, very clever of you, try some more, take care my friend..............Vera....... Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2014 at 3:15 AM - To make the day great .... I painted some flowers for you, dear Vera - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman September 9, 2014 at 4:33 PM Anne-Lise . . . a most unusual, but quite compelling shape poem. The image you scribe of the "Beautiful rose heads" certainly sets the tenor for the rest of your narrative. Very well-conceived, articulated work here. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Cheers, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2014 at 3:19 AM - Say it with flowers :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Gary :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker September 9, 2014 at 1:14 PM interesting concept my poetic friend, creativity and imagination on full display Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2014 at 1:24 PM - A earth where flowers grow .... can we ask for more? - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Frederic :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker September 9, 2014 at 12:48 PM Good morning Anne Lise. This is the prettiest poem I have ever seen. The poem is great. I wrote a poem today called, "Nurse Anne." I thought you might have an interest in seeing it. Congratulations on your beautiful creation here. Keep up the good work. Earl Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2014 at 1:03 PM - I love: "Nurse Anne" :)))) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Earl :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath September 9, 2014 at 11:55 AM It's a nice colorful poem's new style. You can do it wonderfully always, I have seen many times. Enjoyed your extra ordinary art. Thanks for sharing. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2014 at 12:00 PM - Sharing a little idee and some flowers with you,my friend bl - - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 9, 2014 at 9:41 AM Nice concrete and fine write, anne Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2014 at 11:33 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Dr.Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith September 9, 2014 at 8:40 AM Beautiful poem and art my dear....hugs Tim Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2014 at 8:49 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Tim :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis September 9, 2014 at 6:52 AM Beautiful conception, excellent presentation, Dear Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2014 at 7:20 AM - Some people annoying over that roses have thorns - for me, I'm more inclined to rejoice that thorns have roses :)) - Demetrios, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak September 9, 2014 at 6:39 AM Beautiful poem and love the shape. "Don't kill the beauty" now that is a motto to live by. Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2014 at 7:24 AM - Roses that smells ....... smells far .... and a long time :) - Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 9, 2014 at 5:40 AM ohh, lovely layout and verse, anne..just like you!... hugs on a fine Tuesday... Anne-Lise Andresen September 9, 2014 at 6:34 AM - Friendship is fragile like wild flowers ..... thank you for being my friend and thanks for your nice visit and comments,dear Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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