These Tears

I'll kill these tears.
I'll fight your fears.
We won't break it,
for our hearts can't take it.
You and I together feel so alive.
You and I together will thrive.
Love might save you.
Love will get us through.
I've a lot to say,
For I love you today.
We can go on,
the love's not gone.
I'd rather solemnly die,
then to hear you sorrowfully cry.
As you start to sing,
the tears of joy you bring.
We can take the love,
angels have dreamnt of.
We're not broken,
for our love has spoken.
Your smile so bright,
sparkling like angelic light.
Take my accepting hand,
together we'll forever stand.
We were born for this,
as we finally kiss.
Should I see, 
how much you love me?
You're the only reason,
I don't accept Death's season.
I love you,
our love true,
we'll make it through.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/19/2009 4:56:00 PM
Good write! Imagery comes alive in this piece! Jeremiah
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Date: 5/15/2009 1:40:00 PM
Very strong feelings love is a thing of wonder! Wonderful write! Laura :)
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Date: 5/15/2009 1:25:00 PM
"you are the only reason I don't accept death season"...that is incredible..you have written a strong piece filled with emotion..good work.
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