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These Eyes

These wondrous eyes draw me in
I can feel the desert on my skin
And almost touch where time begins


Howard Tunick  

"Through Your Eyes"

12 June 2015

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20 Words

Copyright © Howard Tunick | Year Posted 2015

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February 3, 2017 at 1:35 PM

Nice description of a mystic moment. Congrats on the selection. daver

February 4, 2017 at 6:34 AM

Thank you Daver. Too bad the picture the poem was written for wasn't published with it. Written for a contest quite awhile ago.

February 3, 2017 at 8:11 AM

Hi Howard. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)

February 4, 2017 at 6:35 AM

Thank you so much Teddy.

June 14, 2015 at 5:48 AM

Thanks Lyric Man. A new experience for me, writing for a contest. We'll see....

Francine Roberts

June 12, 2015 at 6:13 PM

lovely entry, good luck in the contest

June 12, 2015 at 6:17 PM

Thank you Francine. This little poem almost wrote itself. I looked at those beautiful eyes and was literally drawn in.

June 12, 2015 at 6:01 PM

lovely rhyme Howard good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

June 12, 2015 at 6:15 PM

Thank you Jan.

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