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These Days, My Days

These days, my days, come in stanzas 
grouped by mood and circumstances.
Older days linger longer in so many ways
less in a daze, less lost in a maze,
with muse engaged in self contemplation
old hands of time mesmerised in slow motion.

For these days, my days, are more cherished,
swirled around the tongue and relished
like an old wine popped open breathes,
and gets rid of its wrinkles and dead leaves.

The opening stanza of flippant youth days
extravagantly splurged and set ablaze
sets the scene for middle-day saga
when your family drove the drama.
But these days, my last days in seclusion
are timely days, for me to make conclusion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 10:18 PM
Congratulations on your win. Flow and rhyme right on. It's the self awareness I'm drawn to in this poem.
Krampe Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 8:42 PM
I enjoyed the images in your poem, John, especially the comparison to savoring wine.
Allison Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:51 PM
I think many can relate to these feelings John, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 8:44 PM
Nicely done John, congratulations on your well deserved win.. Hugs Eve
Sands Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 5:40 PM
Congratulations for your win John! :)
Moorman Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Great poem, John! Congrats on your win in Daniel's superb contest.
Turner Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Congratulations John on your placement in my contest. Your last verse pretty much sums up my entire life:)
Cozart Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Very nice rhyming, John. Good write.
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