Vijay Pandit Poet Enclosed Rhyme

These Arms Long To Hold You

Sensuous allures float in pulchritude of white swan
Upon your lotus pond, arousing visions of romance
As I see you there where pink blossoms dance
And kiss your presence in ambiance of golden dawn.

Nary a cloud foreshadows my blue sky of tomorrow
As primrose emotions evoke blossoms of meadows;
In emerald green terrain, there are no dark shadows
For memories of yesteryear bear no hints of sorrow.

You entice ruby moods applauding crimson hues
Cheering for our love in chrysanthemum flowers,
Bright red tulips, soft pink roses, and spring rain showers
As ode of desires muses love-verses you schmooze.

And you sparkle gemstones from prisms of tinted dew
Igniting passions within whiffs of scented breeze
Caressing my wishes in embrace of seductive tease,
Instinctively aware: how these arms long to hold you!

September 24, 2019
Placed 1st: Pick a title, vol. 9-enclosed rhyme poetry contest
Title chosen: These arms long to hold you
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Placed 3rd: Strand 660 contest by Brian Strand

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Liam Mcdaid October 15, 2019 at 7:34 AM your pen sparkles in the dewdrops in this very beautifully painted piece vijay i pray you have a blessed beautiful week

Hello There October 4, 2019 at 9:58 AM Oh so deserving... Congratulations, Vijay <3 Vijay Pandit October 5, 2019 at 4:35 PM So kind of you, HT..many thanks.

Sandra Adams October 3, 2019 at 6:33 PM I knew this one would be a top winner, congratulations Vijay on your first place win :) hugs Vijay Pandit October 5, 2019 at 4:35 PM Much appreciate my friend..many thanks.

M. L. Kiser September 27, 2019 at 8:21 PM Wow, highly romantic passion you've penned with this piece; a smooth, enjoyable read. Vijay Pandit September 28, 2019 at 8:09 AM Much appreciate MLK--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy September 27, 2019 at 7:45 AM Another lovely piece smoothly blending romance with nature, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit September 28, 2019 at 8:08 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Hello There September 26, 2019 at 3:35 PM A beauty, Vijay ~ Delicious!! (if you don't mind my saying) Decadent, too ~ Loved this ~ a fave :) Vijay Pandit September 26, 2019 at 5:16 PM So kind of you HT--much appreciate your thoughts..many thanks. A special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich September 25, 2019 at 6:05 PM wow, you really adorned your lines with beautiful detail. I love that title line of all the ones we were given, but kept mine only one verse. This is sure to please the judge! Vijay Pandit September 26, 2019 at 6:57 AM Much appreciate Andrea..yes--I liked that title line as well. You accomplished much in your stanza--that is the power of brevity.

Brandy Nicole September 24, 2019 at 10:31 PM Oh my!!! One could fall in love with words such as these. Longing is evident, and that sweet ache to be held. The flowers blush. :) As do I. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. A favorite for me. "Caressing my wishes in embrace of seductive tease" Indeed. Simply breathtaking Vijay. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit September 25, 2019 at 8:28 AM Nobody knows romantic verses better than you my friend..glad you liked the poem..I am always happy to read your comments..many thanks, Brandy. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Jennifer Proxenos September 24, 2019 at 1:15 PM The beauty within this poem is exquisite dear Vijay, the flowers, the colours, desire and longing penned in flowing poetic verses "The arms long to hold you" - enchanting. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit September 25, 2019 at 8:25 AM So glad to read your words of approval..so glad you liked the poem, Jennifer..you are always very kind..many many thanks.

Sandra Adams September 24, 2019 at 11:38 AM such a beautiful romantic piece flowing through your ink, elegantly written...best of luck in the contest, i am sure it will score big :) hugs Vijay Pandit September 25, 2019 at 8:23 AM Many thanks for the vote of confidence, Sandy--means a lot coming from a talented poetess..much appreciate.

Heidi Sands September 24, 2019 at 11:28 AM Wow! This is a winner Vijay! I love the primrose line, but also all the flowers you included. This is a beauty :) Vijay Pandit September 25, 2019 at 8:22 AM So glad you liked it Heidi..much appreciate your supportive comments, as always..many thanks.

Arturo Michael September 24, 2019 at 10:23 AM Poetic artistry at play in your write... Romance of hearts...Nice one Vijay Pandit September 25, 2019 at 8:21 AM Many thanks, as always, my friend for your visit and comments--much appreciate, Arturo.

Judy Ball September 24, 2019 at 8:44 AM This is lovely Vijay. It read to me of someone in love with a wood nymph. Like a lovely fantasy. Great imagery. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit September 25, 2019 at 8:20 AM Glad you liked it, Judy..many thanks for your visit and comments..much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham September 24, 2019 at 8:16 AM You are the master of romance Vijay, Another gem from your pen. Good luck. Tom. Vijay Pandit September 25, 2019 at 8:19 AM So glad to hear that from a master poet..much appreciate Tom..many thanks.

Richard Lamoureux September 24, 2019 at 8:05 AM You are so good at these romantic writes. Good luck in the contest. Blessings Rick. Vijay Pandit September 25, 2019 at 8:18 AM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Richard--many thanks.