There’s A Sadness In The River

There’s a sadness in the river 
That well the river knows 

Which sounds beneath the surface 
And goes where rivers go 

Murmuring in mute assent 
Its current status quo – 

It’s the silent hush of summer
Borne long, too long for men

Who know the season’s solstice
Like candles in the wind

Will flicker in the fairest breeze
Will flutter and will end – 

It’s the mournful moan of winter
That knows the cold of stones

A universal sound that weeps
With seeds that have been sown

Going where the river goes
In tears it cries alone –
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wheeler Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 2:58 PM
Beautiful couplets. The rhythm and gentle alliteration are masterfully done. I really enjoyed this!
Oldham Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Glad you liked it, Jessica! Thanks for your comments!
Wolf Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:33 PM
Haunting, beautiful couplets, John. Bravo, Gershon
Oldham Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Thanks for your comments, Gershon. Appreciate it!
Hind Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 4:06 PM
Oh, wow, John. I love your style and your poem. :)
Oldham Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 6:25 AM
With appreciation, Paige. :)
M  Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 3:00 PM
So very, very beautiful John….Debx
Oldham Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 6:24 AM
Thank you, Deb!! Glad you enjoyed it!
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