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There are times where it seems as if we're characters in God's dream That time is an artificial construct And things happen by chance or dumb luck There are times where I'm aghast Where the future and past have no contrast And life feels like a rude fantasy Draped with a sham reality so scantily There are times where I can only say Thank you God for this peculiar buffet Full of indescribable chaos and delight On which only You have the copyright

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Date: 3/6/2017 11:15:00 AM
Great work, really inspiring and incredible.
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Trey Hamner
Date: 4/9/2017 6:53:00 PM
Thank you much, sir.
Date: 12/10/2016 9:28:00 AM
Very nice, Trey! Loved the last two lines. Congratulations!
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Trey Hamner
Date: 12/10/2016 11:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim.
Date: 12/10/2016 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations Trey :)
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Trey Hamner
Date: 12/10/2016 11:58:00 PM
Thank you, Gary.
Date: 12/10/2016 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations ! :)
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Trey Hamner
Date: 12/10/2016 11:57:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
Date: 12/5/2016 4:20:00 AM
A very nice poem ... read with pleasure ..
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Trey Hamner
Date: 12/5/2016 11:20:00 AM
Thanks, Probir. I appreciate your encouragement.
Date: 12/5/2016 2:51:00 AM
Trey, I like this poem a ton. May not believe exactly the same things as you do, but do think it's good to be able to find delight in there with all the craziness. Cheers, Doug.
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Trey Hamner
Date: 12/5/2016 11:20:00 AM
Thank you very much, Doug.