There Are No Accidents, Hagar

It always seems as though, the first line holds this key....
Creating a moment it's poetic course yet, rarely, be she thus
Adrift about his isles desert dunes like Ishmael, an outcast; tides
These ebbs in flows to scrutinize their Archer's bow ? Zodiac's montage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 22, 2014 at 12:14 AM
John, your poem is amazing, and beyond compare, no other poet on the soup, writes as good as you, except a few other poets who have similar writings as this. Have a nice day, I feel the need to read this poem again. I like the mood, within every line..... Enjoyed stopping by:) Love and hugs ~SKAT~
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May 22, 2014 at 12:10 AM
clever write....SKAT
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May 21, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Your writing Jeremy is something that is out of this world so unique-Love Ettie
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