Theory of Us

The theory of us, the collective
 Amid this climate as thus, suggestive

The passion, the fire, our intuitive desire
Becoming more, undoubtedly, known assure
Glimpses of your inner shared as your soul
The desired thirst for life as more
As was said, and thus is told
Know that, as yet to see, that all shall be...
The blossom of life that shines, as we, learn of the flowering  Amenti...
As all of the man's knowledge, in the un conscience engraved
Yet unknowingly followed, the conscience life enslaved

The importance, the sacrifice, life, and our strife
 the individual path within shared to be our sin
A lifetime not is shown, definitive certainty unknown.
And so, we must make our choices...
The duality, the mind, DNA embedded voices...
Answers to infinity's end, where does it begin?
The questions of truth, it's spark, born of divinity, and lying within.....

As a quest for material desire
For our fire, is tamed, controlled and enslaved. 
As above and so below, the embedded truth engraved.
True freedom is hidden as our vision is steered
As tempered our strife, yet held nebulous, our fear

In effect, whole portions, the intellect
A population, not developing, simple logic
Reasoning skills, those attributes needed
 Discernment and right choices left conceded

We never had to develop these skills 
Environments raised suppressed,
Our personal inquisitiveness favored authoritative, compliances suggest
The society, inhabitation, and complacency
Encouraged infancy and mental dependency
Our mundane life, Inertia of conformity 

Truth, vision and the abundance of our soul
Learned, tormented and negligence grow old
The fire, our feelings, and the winter, passion as cold
Forgotten as inhibited within conformity being told.

Mystery, and wisdom, knowledge, and power... our discernments, grown old...



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 Amid this climate, ... us, you, our collective conformity...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/4/2017 5:38:00 AM
It rises so many questions about humanity and its existence...quite a creative piece here. Good luck. :)
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Date: 2/4/2017 11:41:00 PM
Thank you very much.
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