Then Came

Sisters and teachers
       Were once my healers
Then through this life's trend
Came lovers and actors
        Who fed me the cake
That today and each day
I'm just like hay
No doubt life's such a rife




Written between 2000-2003
Just the young thoughts of the young mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lovechild Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 6:46 PM
Hope the cake was moist...
Hunjeri Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:00 AM
Lol! one day ill reveal if the cake was moist. So get tuned on my poems, your answer will be coming. Thank you for passing my work, I appreciate your visit a lot
Thoungamba Meitei Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 7:10 PM
Nicely written... :) Rajkumar
Hunjeri Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 5:29 AM
Thank you Rajkumar for your comment:)
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