Then and Now

that was day when i was asleep 
this is the day me being awake 

that was the day of subconsciousness
this is  the day of supra-consciousness

this is the day, me hanging at the edge 
today i am ready to get out of the troublesome age 

i summon the angel, that i had, within my fleshy cage 
i am surprised to see it being devil's roommate    

i have been through a lot of changes 
then and now has been a new story to tell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 10:14 AM
From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Karma. Love, Carol
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October 3, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Very awesome and intriguing write you have penned today, karma karma
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