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Then and Now

Bora-Bora seemed exotic Bali and Mal -- tempting,erotic The Arctic tundra, far away The Congo, steamy: Stay away... Now the world has shrunken so No place is too far to go That Star is but a parsec near Time to go; my ride is here

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Date: 2/13/2019 11:34:00 PM
I truly want to know the REAL ending, where the ride was taking you....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/14/2019 9:51:00 PM
I'm like Frank Stockton, who wrote "The Lady and the Tiger." Just have to leave the ending, where the ride was taking me, up to you, the reader! :) gw
Date: 2/13/2019 2:03:00 PM
Fun poem, Gershon. Love it.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2019 6:17:00 PM
Alright, glad to hear that it was fun. Thank you, Line! :) gw
Date: 2/13/2019 1:56:00 PM
Love this part ( Time to go; my ride is here) :-) Excellent my friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2019 6:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for the positive feedback, Bobby! ~ Gershon

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