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Then and Now

A broken-hearted lady shuts her eyes
and summons forth sweet scenes from days long past.
She loved him so. His promises gave rise
to firm assurances their love would last.
“But that was then and this is now!” she cries.

They’d planned to wed and have a family,
watch proudly as their kids met with success,
then age together peacefully. The key
to bliss was love. They’d claim their happiness.
But that was then, and this is now, you see.

She feels so old, though she’s just thirty-two.
She entertains no hopes that she will find
someone to share her life. She’s bid adieu
all thoughts of kids. THEN-dreams she’s left behind,
for this is NOW. She nurses her bleak view.

	********************

She feels so young as she walks down the aisle
at thirty-nine. There is no need to wait
to claim the life she’s dreamed about. Her smile
says, “This is now”; and it is not too late.
The blight of THEN has been gone for a while.


January 21, 2019, written for and entered in Silent One's That Was Then and This Is Now Contest--placed 2nd

January 31, 2019, entered in Mark Toney's Poetry Marathon, Mile 14

February 2, 2019, entered in Brian Strand's Early February contest
Placed 1st

April 30, 2019, entered in John Lawless's Crap Shoot Poetry Contest
Placed 6th (of ten)
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Lawless Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 9:32 AM
beautifully done Janice, a story within a story.....thanks for entering the contest
Canerdy Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 9:14 PM
John, thank you so much for placing my poem! Janice
Ibeh Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 4:47 PM
Easy to see why this fantastic poem won all these contests! Thoroughly enjoyed. Congrats on your win, Janice!:-)
Canerdy Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Thank you so much, Edward! Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Congrats on your win. You know how to tell a good story.:0) Thanks for your visit.
Canerdy Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 4:44 PM
Thanks so much, Richard! Janice
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 2:59 PM
I love the turn, wonderfully crafted piece Janice, congratulations for your win, xomo!
One Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 8:57 AM
It is normally a broken heart that saves us... Great take on the contest Janice.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Canerdy Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 12:40 PM
THANKS for the placements, S.O.! Janice
Pandit Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 7:46 AM
That last stanza brings a happy smile. Enjoyed reading your story Janice..many many can relate to your theme. A sure win.
Canerdy Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 3:49 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Sands Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 6:08 PM
A great poem with a lovely ending Janice :)
Canerdy Avatar
January 21, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Thanks so much, Heidi! Janice
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