Their Love

these pretty comments
for your face
so perfectly shapen
look at this!
you're in there
while we rot
the CRAZIES
we broke down
we lost it all
could you see
but enough of us
here YOU are
righteous and floating
our hands are reaching up
we're the creaking in your bed
we're the doubt
and we will find you soon

r.thomas'10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 28, 2010 at 6:06 AM
What a great array of poetry we have been presented to read today. I am happy yours is one of those poems I have read today. I hope your day brings you much inspiration so you may continue presenting your poetry to us to read Ryan. Love, Carol
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