Their Feet

Reminds me of my young nephew - who is on the track team at Wesleyan. I like the form of cinquain and you use it well. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

A very well crafted cinquain. Children's feet always do interesting things indeed ;) Love this poem

I love the way you describe your sons, their different approaches to life and the wishes you hold for each of them. They all sound wonderful, Caroline, but I think I would admire Steven the most if he is able to see all people as equals. Very much enjoyed your poem. I will keep you posted and let you know something after I see the new podiatrist tomorrow. Love, Carolyn

this is very nice good job with it and it has a great flow.. cory

This makes me smile, and think of my own sons...the younger always striving to keep up with the older... A sweet and touching poem of brothers! ;)

Oh, Dr.Ram Mehta, my sons are no longer toddlers! :) Steven's 20, Andrew's 18, Matthew's 11. Thanks though for the comments.

Nice write on the mother's day enjoying the bliss with the toddlers, I enjoyed the rhythm, Caroline

Yes Caroline-Cecile Great Verse lovely Wandering feet we have sets of 3 with wanderlust to find a way sounds like a handfull xo Don

what a very interesting way to write of one's sons. Almost Biblical sounding, Caroline. Very nice.

* “Steven * Andrew * & * Matthew * Beautiful Names * With Beautiful Qualities * Beautiful CarolineCecile” * aside from loving this blessing for others of a poem * knowing that joy and pride must fill * “Your Lovely Heart” * i was planning upon visiting with * “Your Beautiful Verse” * just the other day yet became side tracked so * tis good to behold this sweeetness of * “Your Radiant Faith Filled Glow Again” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah