Their Eyes

To my daughters

Her eyes
Searching the stars
To share her song, her heart
A clearing in the woods, hazel
Sofia.
Her eyes
Like azure skies
Reflecting in water
Absorbing all that life offers
Johanna.
Her eyes
That cannot lie
The goodness that lies
Within clouds to water God's fields
Stacey.

By CarolineCecile
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Anish Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Sweet poetry! What did you think of my poems on moontown cafe? Yours Matthew Anish
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May 9, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Enjoyed reading your innovative writing today Caroline. Hope to be reading more of your poetry very soon. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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May 9, 2011 at 8:49 AM
Dear Caroline, you have six remarkable children. I wish I could meet them. It seems that each has some of your fine qualities. What a lovely way to spend Mothers Day, writing of your children. Hope you had a wonderful weekend! Love, Carolyn
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May 9, 2011 at 7:12 AM
This is a beautiful tribute to your daughters Caroline.. A sign of love omnipresent.. I quite enjoyed this write of yours.. Loads of smiles while reading it :) enjoy the week ahead
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May 9, 2011 at 12:36 AM
Yes Caroline indeed you paint a picture ... the eyes that cannot lie... azure eyes like timeless skys if eyes do lock a fixture xo Yes Jesus had several incarnations from Adam, Hermes Aaron with Moses and had directly influenced religions of many faiths including Buddism over the centuries. Basically aimed at peace and the non murder of your neighbour love n light Don
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May 8, 2011 at 9:13 PM
* “Sophia * Johanna * & * Stacy * Beautiful Qualities Also But * Sooo Much Gentler * Beautiful CarolineCecile” * tis is a double treat this night to find * “Your Sweeetened Glow” * melodies and gratefulness and truth and goodness * “Smile * Your Beautiful Light Is Bright” * six children amid sooo joy and to believe and know that * “Eternal Bliss Awaits Their Precious Hearts” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah
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