The Young Woman

the young woman
ponders life’s hardships
her hair thins quickly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 8:01 PM
charles, this is nice to read, but for me it doesn't work as haiku because it is something that would not happen in the moment (the hair thinning part).
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