The Years Had Stolen Her Smile

The old woman walked with trouble and pain.
Yet the deepest hurt was in her heart.
For she was all alone once again.
She and her children had grown apart.

Her soul mate and love of sixty years
had passed away and left her here.
Now she had nothing but dried up tears.
Nothing seemed to bring her cheer.

Nobody came to call on her.
In this darkened house she sat alone.
There was never anything new to occur.
All day long she had a silent phone.

When she gazed in the mirror once in awhile
an old and ancient woman looked back.
She wondered why the years had stolen her smile.
Usually she felt her soul under attack.

The old woman wanted no more than to die.
Leave this earth and join her dear love.
As for being here she wondered why.
Every hour she sent prayers up above.

Meanwhile she sits and rocks so sadly.
Wishing with all her destroyed heart
to leave this life as she wants so badly.
All she wants to do now is depart.



For Skat's contest "Saddest Landscape"
you wanted depressing--I think I gave it to you!!
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Mcconnell Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 12:43 PM
so sad but so true for many Deb, really so well penned with nice flow and super rhyme. God bless , Gordon
Anglesey Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Very sad indeed. Well done. You captured the emotions perfectly and with great visuals. I saw your BLOG about the surgery and hope you are doing well
Lamoureux Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 9:35 AM
So glad to see this on the winners list where it belongs. Congratulations.
Torres Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 8:03 AM
Deb... this is so sad... sometimes, along loneliness...we would only wish to die... b'cos in death, we will never feel the pain, the emptiness and sorrow. .. such a beautiful masterpiece... CONGRATULATIONS!!! :O))
A  Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 9:53 PM
DEB, , CONGRATULATIONS....SKAT
Lamoureux Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 9:18 AM
This is so sad, I can not imagine a sadder landscape. You captured the essence of the contest. Well done.
Curtis Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 8:27 PM
Looks like a winner to me. Revelations 9:6
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