The Wrong Story

At my grandson’s graduation,
(Onto middle school, he’ll go!)
An official told a story
I found not quite apropos.

‘Twas the ancient tale of Icarus,
Who flew, with wings of wax,
But, ignoring good advice,
He took his journey to the max.

Though his father gave a warning 
Not to fly too near the sun,
Icarus could not resist and soon
The melting had begun.

In his plummet to his death, perhaps
He pondered his mistake. 
“Listen to your elders” was one point
The speaker tried to make.

But he also warned the graduates
They shouldn’t reach too high,
Not a message for commencement.
(Plus, by doing so, you’ll die!)

Though I know it’s unrealistic 
That all future dreams come true, 
Still, to crush those possibilities
Was not the thing to do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 3:35 PM
Then again, why die just to fly high?! It's a dilemma...
Greenhough Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 9:27 PM
Yes, some school official does this every year. I was steered away from my dream job by a school counselor. It is time to bring this subject up and you did. Nice job.
Flood Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 3:25 PM
I don’t know if the expression is universal but in the UK we have the term ‘Knob head’, it’s not a polite expression so in this official’s case, perhaps it should be preceded by ‘Mr’. Enjoyed the write, Ilene, but I do hope he was due to retire, like, soon!
Slaughter Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 9:56 AM
Good one, Ilene. What do you wanna bet that "official" will not be invited back to next year's graduation? And I agree with Jan.
Allison Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 4:43 PM
what a very odd story to relate and a very weird thing to say to the graduates Ilene. Hugs jan xx
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