The Wreck

The last few weeks have been real hard
You see the "dealer of life" deals the cards
As the trials and blessings come and go
It's true we must reap what we sow
At times the trials are many and the blessings are few
Just let the light of your soul shine on through
Yesterday I walked to the bridge over the creek
By the time I got there I was tired and weak
As I sat on the bridge taking a break
Questioning "how much more can I take"
A speeding drunk driver lost control
I watched it unfold nice and slow
Sometimes the blessings are clear to see
They crashed into the rail right next to me
My guardian angel said soft as could be
I'll never give up on you don't give up on me
These last few weeks I have felt rather low
With a deep down emptiness up in my soul
So regardless of the pain or length of the fight
I reckon it's once again time for me to write
For my pen is the tool that I use to see
The power of the Lord working in me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Neels Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Wow, this one made me cry.. A friend of mine is fighting cancer at the moment and just yesterday we we're discussing his battle and him questioning how much more he can take.. Awesome Michael ~rgds WN
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February 13, 2009 at 10:26 AM
This write made my eyes teary. What's the word for it dejavu (I probably misspelled that) Many years ago, feeling the way this poem reads, I kept asking myself 'How much more can I take', the pain of the situation was almost unbearable. But today, I thank God and my children, that I am still here. Exquisite write my friend...Exquisite.
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August 12, 2008 at 1:31 PM
this was a beautiful warm, gentel poem enjoyed reading it. thank you for reading my Boogie Woogie Boy girl and for your comment
Young Avatar
July 17, 2008 at 8:39 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured this week. very well deserved. always, GiNoLoco
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July 15, 2008 at 5:19 AM
Congratulations Michael on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Always an amazing read. Love, Shar
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July 14, 2008 at 1:30 PM
This is such a powerful piece. Nice use of rhyme. Your inspirational message is wonderful. Congratulations on being featured this week. Blessings to you. Karen
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July 14, 2008 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations Michael on "The Wreck" being featured. In the long run, everything will work out. God Bless. Vince
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July 14, 2008 at 8:18 AM
Hi Michael Ahhh, this is soooo beautiful! What a way to start the morning. Here's to our guardian angel that watches over us. You really write well from your heart! Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patricia
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July 14, 2008 at 4:59 AM
Michael, congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Thank you for your comments. Love, Carol
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July 13, 2008 at 11:41 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Michael & thanks for your most welcome comments on my postings.Rgds Brian
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