The Wreath, a Soldier Chronicle Pt. 1

A fine mist, hovers close to the ground,
But it cannot be a fog.

It cannot be, it's a hundred and three,
This is desert, not a bog.

Strain as I may, I still cannot see,
The earth, that lies beneath.

Until a man, comes into view,
He gently sets a wreath.

My camera softly clicks, but once,
At the Solemn view,

I caught his eye, he walked my way,
And whispered " who are you"

I said, I'm taking photographs,
To chronicle this fight,

Just then, the mist began to clear,
My eyes beheld the sight,

For what happened here, the night before,
The worst I had ever seen.

I could not bring myself to shoot,
I just could not believe,

The soldier pointed out a patch,
On a dead mans arm,

The Stars and Stripes,smeared with blood,
Protects me from all harms.

I bowed my head, tears filled my eyes,
At the carnage I did see,

These men and women lying here,
Bravely died for me.

As I raised my head, to thank him,
The soldier with the wreath,

He briskly turned, stood up straight,
I could barely breath,

He raised a stiff hand, to his brim,
Slowly let it fall,

Then suddenly he disappeared,
If not there at all.

I walked among the fallen troops,
Looked down, could not believe,

The soldier that lay below me,
Was the one that set the wreath.


  To the Soldiers of Desert Storm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/5/2009 7:41:00 AM
Another of your marvelous writes my love....a poignant tribute to our men and women in the armed forces~Hugs~Mary
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Date: 12/2/2009 6:18:00 PM
very moving poem, nice tribute to the soldeirs
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Date: 12/2/2009 10:58:00 AM
Poignant words depicting a tragic time. Nice work and God bless...Raul
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Date: 12/2/2009 7:23:00 AM
This poem goes directly to my favs..... I am glad you posted this pop.... You knew that I would react this way huh???? Can't wait for the conclusion, that one is going to my favs as well......:JP]
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