Kayod5 Kayode Poet Verse

The Wrath of a Snake

In the sun you dictate the pace, 
confining me to thick night;  
still you are trampling on my tail.
Cruel man i kiss your heel.
Coyote strolls not in the  day,
just man wanders not at night.



Name:Kayod5
Contest title: Night Creatures
Date: 15th Jan,2015
No 2-Rattlesnake.

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Kelly Deschler January 26, 2015 at 4:27 PM It is nice to see your poem on the winner's list. Congrats to you, Kayode! Very creative work, my friend!

Sara Kendrick January 24, 2015 at 6:26 AM Interesting work..Yes, the snake has bruised His heel and He will bruise his head..Great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Pandita Sietesantos January 22, 2015 at 1:09 PM Just circlying back to offer huge congratulations on your beautiful win! Well done! Pandita. Kayod5 Kayode January 23, 2015 at 8:59 PM Hi sweetie,thank you for the visit and have a lovely Weekend...huggs

Rob Carmack January 22, 2015 at 8:54 AM Congrats Kayod5 on your win. Kayod5 Kayode January 23, 2015 at 9:01 PM Hi Rob,how are you today? Immense thanks for your visit and have a lovely Weekend...huggs

Eve Roper January 21, 2015 at 7:08 PM Kayod5, beautiful poem, congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend Eve Eve Roper January 23, 2015 at 9:33 PM Today I'm fabulous, hubby treated me out to dinner, my sons and grandchildren or spoiling me, and I will be 64 Sunday, so I have been blessed. Thank you for asking, you are a wonderful poet and story teller. Blessings Eve Kayod5 Kayode January 23, 2015 at 9:00 PM Thank you Eve. How are today?

Sandra Haight January 21, 2015 at 6:41 PM Very creative, Kayod5! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra Kayod5 Kayode January 23, 2015 at 9:03 PM Hi Sandra,how are you today? Thank you for the visit and have a lovely Weekend....huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 21, 2015 at 7:58 AM Full of great wisdom...I always love reading your poetry...congrats...hugs, Rhonda Kayod5 Kayode January 23, 2015 at 9:04 PM How are today Rhonda? Thank you for the visit and have a lovely Weekend....huggs

Teddy Kimathi January 20, 2015 at 11:26 PM Showers of applause to your WIN Kayode! ;-) Kayod5 Kayode January 20, 2015 at 11:43 PM Thank you very much Teddy,have a lovely day...huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 20, 2015 at 10:20 PM Brilliant take Kayode! Congrats on ur win! Kayod5 Kayode January 20, 2015 at 11:12 PM Thank you Upma.

Debbie Guzzi January 20, 2015 at 7:30 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & love Kayod5 Kayode January 20, 2015 at 11:12 PM Thank you Debbie.

Paul Callus January 20, 2015 at 3:29 PM There is always wisdom in what you write, Kayode; animals usually react when they feel threatened. Congrats on your win my friend. // paul Kayod5 Kayode January 20, 2015 at 11:13 PM Thank you very much Paul.

Jan Allison January 20, 2015 at 2:28 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx Kayod5 Kayode January 20, 2015 at 11:14 PM Thank you my friend.

Kelly Deschler January 19, 2015 at 10:54 PM Humans can be cruel to the animals that seem to threaten them. But, it is difficult to know their true intentions since they cannot speak... You're the only one that I've seen to choose the rattlesnake as your inspiration. A very creative write, Kayode! Good luck in the contest! Kayod5 Kayode January 20, 2015 at 11:15 PM Thank you Kelly.

Arlene Smith January 19, 2015 at 7:58 PM Nicely done, dear friend.. Sure to be a winner!... Hugs... Arlene Kayod5 Kayode January 20, 2015 at 11:15 PM Thank you Arlene.

Pandita Sietesantos January 17, 2015 at 1:48 PM Kayod5, this flows so beautiful with wild imagery, it is definitely a winner! Best wishes in the contest, my friend! Pandita.

Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 4:14 PM Very descriptive Kayod5 am thankful we don't have snakes around us here:-) Hugs jan xx Kayod5 Kayode January 15, 2015 at 5:50 PM The Lord is good all the times,thank goodness we have no snake ...huggs

Liam Mcdaid January 15, 2015 at 3:06 PM excellent pen really very beautifully painted piece Kayod5 Kayode January 15, 2015 at 3:12 PM Thank you very much Liam,may the Lord of hosts reward your kindness...huggs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 15, 2015 at 11:03 AM Enjoyed it Kayod.Love>>>rajat Kayod5 Kayode January 15, 2015 at 11:33 AM Hi Rajat,thanks for the visit; I will soon be with you for the latest in town...huggs