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“The Wound is the Place Where the Light Enters You.”- Rumi

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Written 19 October 2025 for Rumi Quotes Poetry Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet

The Wound and the Light


                                                           The Wound and the Light

                                           A deep wound on the back, a stinging ache,
                                            A profound rupture with a heart that breaks,
                                         The pain smoulders and holds its deadly sway
                                              With long shadows lingering every day.

                                           The pain hurts and oft spurs in me a frown,
                                                A heavy feeling like pulling me down,
                                                  I try to hide it, not to show a weep 
                                               As a secret sorrow invades me deep.

                                       Yet in that deep wound, a space soon appears,
                                                A gentle aperture for unshed tears,
                                        Where gleams of light penetrate, soft and thin,
                                               To heal, restore and refurbish within.

                                        Through that wound, so sensitive and still raw,
                                            A light that marks a difference does draw,
                                        Not harsh or glowing bright  that burns the eye,
                                               But with a gentle shine that softly lies.

                                          It`s the light that clears darkness, chases fear,
                                              Whispers  a sweet tune of hope in my ear
                                           To build myself with a strong shining thread
                                           And rise anew despite the pains that dread;

                                          The light that enters me, sparkling quite clear,
                                             Reflects on my aches, dries my every tear,
                                              Reveals the inner strength I did not know
                                              And supports my spirit to grow and glow.

                                          It`s light that sows seeds of kindness, so true,
                                              A space for empathy to push on through,
                                             That allows me to  feel others` pains near,
                                                And wipe them away with a silent tear.
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Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 10:17 AM
Compared to mine, yours is much more poetic. You and I chose the same Rumi quote!
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