Kim Rodrigues Poet Senryu

The Worst Restroom

stinker   in the      woods

how do you                              rest     with   rank scent?

not              johnny                spotless



                              3/7/2023

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Gershon Wolf March 9, 2023 at 6:42 PM ha, ha, ha! Brings back all those 'outhouse with a hole' memories: Hello Muddah, Hello Faddah. Here we are, at Camp Granada. Camp is very, very pretty. And we'd even have some fun if it weren't so shitte! lol. Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2023 at 8:12 PM And if it only smelled just of poo…but oh my gosh, I thought I would die…lol

Darlene De Beaulieu March 9, 2023 at 3:14 PM Hello Kim, ou the worst ever. They stink. Hugs /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu March 10, 2023 at 10:50 AM Hello Kim, you are welcome. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2023 at 3:24 PM Thanks, Darlene :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2023 at 12:52 PM - I'd rather pee in the woods :))) - hugs Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2023 at 1:17 PM Yup! Still it was bear and snake country…so nope… that was the worst though!