The World Revolves Around Hopes

The world revolves around hopes
Without room for dopes
Gotta give yourself power
jot down your notes
Take your ideas
But it may take years
The pay off is great
Like you wouldn't believe
Gotta roll up your sleeves
Just follow your needs
Aknowledge determination is success
you gotta feel your best
To take on the rest
follow your dreams
And never give up
See the wrong but do the right
These are some keys to win the fight
But if you wanna use hands there's a brain in mine
Cause there aint no fist that's stronger then a mind
Without mind power your ready for elimination
Like I explained your key is determination

By: Daniel Aiosa
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Burton Avatar
July 26, 2008 at 6:58 PM
Im inspired and I want more keep writing and never stop
Jordan Avatar
July 25, 2008 at 11:54 AM
Very uplifting poem - well done
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