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The World Revolves Around Hopes

The world revolves around hopes Without room for dopes Gotta give yourself power jot down your notes Take your ideas But it may take years The pay off is great Like you wouldn't believe Gotta roll up your sleeves Just follow your needs Aknowledge determination is success you gotta feel your best To take on the rest follow your dreams And never give up See the wrong but do the right These are some keys to win the fight But if you wanna use hands there's a brain in mine Cause there aint no fist that's stronger then a mind Without mind power your ready for elimination Like I explained your key is determination By: Daniel Aiosa

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/26/2008 6:58:00 PM
Im inspired and I want more keep writing and never stop
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Date: 7/25/2008 11:54:00 AM
Very uplifting poem - well done
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