The World Couldn't Look Away

I saw your story today,
again, and again.

Waiting for the moon to come out
from behind the dark clouds,
I could see the brightness behind it.
It's so bright.
I knew, it's the moon
I knew, it's you.

The dark clouds know; they only make it beautiful
and the moon smiles and shy away behind them.
Struggles to conceal the brightness within
What if the world couldn't look away?
Yes, the world couldn't look away.

Once they saw the moon so bright, beautiful, breathtaking.
The moon smiles and hugs the dark clouds.
Because they only make it beautiful
And so are you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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artlyy Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 8:12 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
June 7, 2026 at 12:34 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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