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The World Began To Turn

I remember that cloudless day in June The world seemed new and young - as young as we. We shared the beach with salt and gull and dune, And we knew love as only love can be. We made a pledge that June down by the sea To always love and laugh - to share and learn. And then our world slowly began to turn To take us where we didn't want to go. That fire once so warm does no longer burn - But that love does not seem so long ago. May 13, 2016, Sad Poem contest for Laura Loo

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Date: 7/12/2016 1:39:00 AM
Larry,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 7/12/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words..I am enjoying the community and the poetry very much
Date: 5/20/2016 1:41:00 PM
Larry, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/20/2016 2:53:00 PM
Thank you for sponsoring the contest...lots of fun..Larry

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