Debbie Temple Poet Haiku

The World Aroundme

THE WORLD AROUND ME, LONLY AND DEPRESSED
            THERES TIMES ITS GOOD, AND AT TIMES I WOUNDER WHY WERE
             EVEN HERE.
                     WHY ARE SO MANY PEPOLE HAVING TO FIGHT OR EVEN KILL.
              WHEN WE SHOULD BE WORRING ABOUT OUR CHILDERS FUTCHER
                                                                                                                                      
                                                                                  by peples mcmurrin

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Dr.Ram Mehta May 29, 2010 at 7:59 PM Nicely written with fine images

Poet Destroyer A May 29, 2010 at 4:54 PM deep write, truely enjoyed, hope you have a nice memorial weekend . P.D.

Skat A May 29, 2010 at 3:45 PM TRUELY AGREED. HAVE A WONDEFUL DAY,,SKAT