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We're so caught up In everyday matters That we often fail to see All that this beautiful world offers We're blind to many fascinating sights In the world around us, out in nature Even in the concrete jungle How often do we pause and listen To the arresting sounds of nature? To birds singing? How often do we notice... When homeless people smile at us? We hardly see beyond the pain and sadness in their eyes How many times have we missed a shooting star While out in the dead of night? Ever see an orchid in full bloom, burrowing... Through a cracked concrete? A spider web covered in dew Glistening in the sun? An embarrassment of riches, the beautiful things In life, and in the world around us STANDARD CONTEST 180,ANY FORM,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 20 LINES Sponsored by Brian Strand (Winner: 1st Place) Date written and posted: 07/26/2018

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Date: 2/25/2019 11:31:00 PM
Beautiful images, Edward. Congrats on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/26/2019 5:07:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line:-) Most obliged.
Date: 2/19/2019 7:41:00 AM
I love this poem. I also love to see these things and try to pay attention every day. It helps to live in the moment. Congratulations for your great win :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/19/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi!:-) I echo your sentiments!

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