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the world

How can the world be saved, the answer is beyond the grave, in the darkness can't be found by the light. Explosion all around me by day and by night, enclosed by emptiness, nothing but a blade and my rift. Somebody wanted me to destroy myself, end my life- chance of a family maybe even a wife, in the darkness men are endangered minds void easy angered. A confused soul devoured by men hole, their is no struggle, it's like a dog trying to bite through a muzzle. In this darkness their is no one to call, cause in this darkness all is at their down fall. How can the world be saved ask the son that JESUS gave..............

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Date: 2/9/2010 1:02:00 PM
i loved this poem i could envision you in this pre apocaplyptic world with your blade crying out for jesus to save you, but thats the thing that gets me is the .......... cuz you dont know if jesus saves you or not and i kinda took that as you were insinuating that there may be a god or there may not. im probably wrong but if you dont mind i would love a soupmail explaination, just so i can see it for how you meant it. =)
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Date: 2/9/2010 11:01:00 AM
This is beautiful. Amazing work, i really love it. Always, Rain
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Date: 3/29/2009 7:40:00 AM
this is a a nice write we all must find hope somewhere and to me jesus is the best place to seek! thank you for your comments!
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