The Working Moon

the moon brings it in
so eerie, but beautiful
slow, rolling moisture
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Excellent haiku, Brandee. Thanks for sharing. Please check your soup mail. Love, Carolyn
Lopez Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 8:41 PM
nature is such a beauty... thanks for this visual !!!
Kendrick Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 1:37 PM
Great Haiku that is very expressive and descriptive painting a picture for me to see. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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February 22, 2010 at 3:08 PM
Somehow I see moon-drenched fog rolling in off the ocean. Very nice haiku, Brandee. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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