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The Woods

The twisted trees swayed as the wind swooshed in the night sky The gates intertwined with vines that blossomed the thorns of time. How they come so close To your heart But yet so far way You stand here counting as days go on by. But what you don't realize is that you have wasted your life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 3/25/2015 4:41:00 PM
Love this write! Dark but has a beauty that makes you want to stay. Hugs
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nicole ussery
Date: 3/26/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, your interpretation of this poem was of mine too. This poem is honestly one of my favorites and seems to be one of poetry soup`s favorites too. I've gotten over 460 views. Once again thank you.
Date: 3/10/2015 8:46:00 PM
Solid message in a compelling poetic form that draws you in!
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nicole ussery
Date: 3/12/2015 8:25:00 AM
Thank you once again, in my opinion this is one of my best works! So far it has gotten over 180 views in about 2 or 3 days. I appreciate your continuous support. Even though my dream is not to become a writer, I have discovered that I am a great poet/writer even though I`m 14.Once again thank you.