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The Wonder of Me

Although my heart is not always worn on my sleeve it is easy to find with eyes open to see. My eyes chatter with interest as they survey all that is before me, they convey what I say. For all of my words that flow from my mouth are the truest words or more questions about, the whys and the why nots of this life we live and debating of how or what I can give. I analyse everything, but try to keep an open mind so that opportunities do not close any door behind. You will see me just gazing as if in a trance, I hear musical notes that entice me to dance. Hair flowing freely and mind too when I talk, the tune of life creates the spring in my walk.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/16/2018 8:45:00 AM
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Date: 2/8/2018 4:34:00 PM
You wrote this very well.. good luck in the contest
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Laura Hay
Date: 2/11/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you SO!! Cheers, Laura.
Date: 2/8/2018 8:30:00 AM
Lovely poem--introspective and uplifting, Laura! Janice
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Laura Hay
Date: 2/11/2018 8:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Janice, kind regards, Laura
Date: 2/8/2018 7:49:00 AM
This is lovely and meaningful, Laura. You look at life with a positive and open mind, undoubtedly the right way forward. ~ So pleased to see that you are finding time to write again:) Warm regards // paul
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Laura Hay
Date: 2/8/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thanks for the good feedback Paul. It was my NY2018 resolution to MAKE time. Last year was so full on in many ways and over the festivities I realised I was missing it! Enjoying catching up with yours and all the other super work on PS. Kind Regards, Laura.
Date: 2/7/2018 10:58:00 AM
A really positive one...I like it...All the best Laura
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Laura Hay
Date: 2/8/2018 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Arturo, wishing you well. Kind Regards, Laura.

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