The Woman With the Metal Bra

She came in all flirty and dirty
attractive and active about thirty
all open jaws in the bar
a neon light, all eyes on her bra
made of metal rivets; they inhale,
pants out of shining chainmail.

The music played
and a dance card was placed
on the bar
all the man raced to fill in the space
Staring straight ahead they waited
for a dangerous wink
smoldering ting, ping, clink,
Woman with a metal bra.


11/12/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:58 PM
This is hilarious!
Horne Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 6:49 AM
LOL, had a good chuckle
Buhagiar Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 1:31 AM
Can't say much on this poem. I don't wear bras. :) Hugs.
Romios Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 6:03 PM
A daring pen, Eve. I laughed out loud... Panagiota Hope you are better, with your physical issues...xx
Leffanta Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 10:53 AM
Bet she found a 'nigh tin shining armour!
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