The Woman Who Waited Too Long

THE WOMAN WHO WAITED TOO LONG

               Empty womb
        Springs tumble winters
              The clock ticks

            Plum blossoms
         Yearnings of passion
               Wept away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 31, 2013 at 9:40 PM
Victoria, congratulations with your poem in frank's "Something to forget " contest. enjoyed the ending... pd
Taylor Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 7:27 PM
Congrats on your win, Victoria - xxxRalph
Guzzi Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 2:24 PM
strong images they feel more senryu...Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 9:27 PM
Great job, congrats on win!
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January 7, 2013 at 8:37 AM
I love these haiku Victoria!Very nice.
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