Gerard Keogh Jr. Poet Triolet

The Wolfman. ( 1941 and 2010.)

Soon the sun will set and the moon will rise.
Stay safe and stay here or he will find you.
Sleek silver hunter with red rabid eyes
The sun starts to set. The moon starts to rise.
He growls lupine rage. This predator spies
his victim, alone. He leaps straight and true.
The sun disappears. The moon is your eyes.
Stay safe and stay here or he will find you.

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 6, 2010 at 11:49 AM Congratulations Gerard on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Movie Scene Triolet". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2010 at 3:26 PM Way to go, Gerard! YOu scored in my triolet contest!! Congratulations. Loved the imagery in this one. andrea

Carrie Richards August 5, 2010 at 8:32 AM Congratulations, Gerard!! I think I'll stay safe and stay here....just in case!! Good advice!! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 5, 2010 at 8:11 AM Congrats Gerard on your big win in Andrea's contest with this wonderful write on the Wolfman.. luv that original horror movie with Lon Chaney.. wow.. perfect win..my friend.. enjoy with luv..

July 26, 2010 at 12:22 PM Nice use of alliteration to share your thoughts. Thank you for your comment on my poem. Sorry for the delay in responding but I've decided to take a break from the Soup. I still plan to stop by from time to time. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Francine Roberts July 24, 2010 at 9:44 PM very visual write, good movie choice , loved it

Carrie Richards July 24, 2010 at 5:44 PM I haven't seen the older version.....but I love the choice!! There is a darkness and a bit of fright in this write!! Great Job!! Good luck in the contest Gerard....this is terrific! ~ Love, Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta July 24, 2010 at 5:40 PM It's nice worded write. Good luck in the contest

Poet Destroyer A July 24, 2010 at 4:45 PM intresting way to show the movie in words..Good luck if it is for Andrea's movie contest. Have a nice day,..p.d.