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The Within Within

Profound existence
Self small part of life itself
Part of part of part

Life within living
Brain cells reflect upon self
Living within life

Minute beginnings                               
Compelled towards reproduction
Divide multiply       
                                              
Pieces know their part
Start of new life connecting
Out of human sight

Copyright © Barbara Campbell | Year Posted 2015

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Anindya Mohan Tagore Date: 9/17/2015 9:13:00 PM Wonderful penning of profound ideas...Warm regards, Bobby Login to Reply Barbara Campbell Date: 9/18/2015 7:15:00 AM Thank you for your positive thoughts. TX BC

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/16/2015 11:13:00 PM Such a deep beauty Sandra! Congrats on superb first place win! Login to Reply Barbara Campbell Date: 9/18/2015 7:15:00 AM Thanks, BC

Eve Roper Date: 9/16/2015 7:48:00 PM Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve Login to Reply Barbara Campbell Date: 9/16/2015 7:52:00 PM Eve, Thank you!! Barbara

Carrie Richards Date: 9/16/2015 7:45:00 PM I love the "part of part of part" .....sensational line !! Congratulations, Barbara!! Login to Reply Barbara Campbell Date: 9/16/2015 7:56:00 PM Carrie, Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for your complimentary comments. It is appreciated!! Barbara

Marvin G. Celestial Date: 9/16/2015 7:32:00 PM You got my mind Barbara! Congratz for the BIG win! Login to Reply Marvin G. Celestial Date: 9/16/2015 8:12:00 PM Great Barbara! Welcome! Read my own version of "Cellular Reality." You can compare it with you then give me some thoughts. Barbara Campbell Date: 9/16/2015 8:02:00 PM Marvin, I am very excited to get my first 1st place! Thank you for the subject; it certainly was a challenge. I am very grateful. Barbara