Barbara Campbell Poet Senryu

The Within Within

Profound existence
Self small part of life itself
Part of part of part

Life within living
Brain cells reflect upon self
Living within life

Minute beginnings                               
Compelled towards reproduction
Divide multiply       
                                              
Pieces know their part
Start of new life connecting
Out of human sight

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Anindya Mohan Tagore September 17, 2015 at 9:13 PM Wonderful penning of profound ideas...Warm regards, Bobby Barbara Campbell September 18, 2015 at 7:15 AM Thank you for your positive thoughts. TX BC

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 16, 2015 at 11:13 PM Such a deep beauty Sandra! Congrats on superb first place win! Barbara Campbell September 18, 2015 at 7:15 AM Thanks, BC

Eve Roper September 16, 2015 at 7:48 PM Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve Barbara Campbell September 16, 2015 at 7:52 PM Eve, Thank you!! Barbara

Carrie Richards September 16, 2015 at 7:45 PM I love the "part of part of part" .....sensational line !! Congratulations, Barbara!! Barbara Campbell September 16, 2015 at 7:56 PM Carrie, Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for your complimentary comments. It is appreciated!! Barbara

Marvin G. Celestial September 16, 2015 at 7:32 PM You got my mind Barbara! Congratz for the BIG win! Marvin G. Celestial September 16, 2015 at 8:12 PM Great Barbara! Welcome! Read my own version of "Cellular Reality." You can compare it with you then give me some thoughts. Barbara Campbell September 16, 2015 at 8:02 PM Marvin, I am very excited to get my first 1st place! Thank you for the subject; it certainly was a challenge. I am very grateful. Barbara