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The Within Within

Profound existence Self small part of life itself Part of part of part Life within living Brain cells reflect upon self Living within life Minute beginnings Compelled towards reproduction Divide multiply Pieces know their part Start of new life connecting Out of human sight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/17/2015 9:13:00 PM
Wonderful penning of profound ideas...Warm regards, Bobby
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Barbara Campbell
Date: 9/18/2015 7:15:00 AM
Thank you for your positive thoughts. TX BC
Date: 9/16/2015 11:13:00 PM
Such a deep beauty Sandra! Congrats on superb first place win!
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Barbara Campbell
Date: 9/18/2015 7:15:00 AM
Thanks, BC
Date: 9/16/2015 7:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Barbara Campbell
Date: 9/16/2015 7:52:00 PM
Eve, Thank you!! Barbara
Date: 9/16/2015 7:45:00 PM
I love the "part of part of part" .....sensational line !! Congratulations, Barbara!!
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Barbara Campbell
Date: 9/16/2015 7:56:00 PM
Carrie, Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for your complimentary comments. It is appreciated!! Barbara
Date: 9/16/2015 7:32:00 PM
You got my mind Barbara! Congratz for the BIG win!
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 9/16/2015 8:12:00 PM
Great Barbara! Welcome! Read my own version of "Cellular Reality." You can compare it with you then give me some thoughts.
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Barbara Campbell
Date: 9/16/2015 8:02:00 PM
Marvin, I am very excited to get my first 1st place! Thank you for the subject; it certainly was a challenge. I am very grateful. Barbara

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