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The Wish

I waited so long, yet no one came.
I stood and watched, and no one saw me.
I walked in time and space, yet no one followed.
I dreamed, and now you are here.

Copyright © Pax Geist | Year Posted 2019

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J Hamilton Gist

January 24, 2021 at 12:30 PM

Builds up to a smooth ending.

September 25, 2020 at 5:53 PM

Beautiful Pax and so true too.. Everything is possible in a dream. Loved it!

September 23, 2020 at 11:14 AM

EXCELLENT.I am charmed. Last line telling much. Blessing

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 15, 2019 at 1:31 PM

Hello Pax Geist, so nice to meet you. A lovely poem. So true who we wait for is in a dream. Have a nice day my friend.

November 15, 2019 at 11:41 AM

this was lovely... patience.. to wait... for what is most important... in the end... God give you a great day. I love your poem. Ann

November 14, 2019 at 8:57 PM

Yes, patience comes true...

November 14, 2019 at 7:17 PM

how beautiful this one is... i guess some dreams do come true...

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