The Wish

I waited so long, yet no one came. I stood and watched, and no one saw me. I walked in time and space, yet no one followed. I dreamed, and now you are here.

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J Hamilton Gist

Date: 1/24/2021 12:30:00 PM

Builds up to a smooth ending.

Afroze Ali

Date: 9/25/2020 5:53:00 PM

Beautiful Pax and so true too.. Everything is possible in a dream. Loved it!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/23/2020 11:14:00 AM

EXCELLENT.I am charmed. Last line telling much. Blessing

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 9/23/2020 10:59:00 AM

Pax, I read several of your wonderful, insightful poems, and I've read this one just now. I especially like this one, a favorite, for sure.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/15/2019 1:31:00 PM

Hello Pax Geist, so nice to meet you. A lovely poem. So true who we wait for is in a dream. Have a nice day my friend.

Ann Foster

Date: 11/15/2019 11:41:00 AM

this was lovely... patience.. to wait... for what is most important... in the end... God give you a great day. I love your poem. Ann

Pax Geist

Date: 11/14/2019 8:57:00 PM

Yes, patience comes true...

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/14/2019 7:17:00 PM

how beautiful this one is... i guess some dreams do come true...