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The Wisest Choice

THE WISEST CHOICE


The shadow of my face on the yellow-painted wall
Masked my agony brewing in like a burning ball

The reflection of my face in the silvery mirror
Displayed in detail traces of every pain and tear

My shadow or my reflection who is wise?.... if let to judge...
My verdict this moment says shadow wins for its witty smudge

Shadow wisely sieved out all my expressions
Showed my neutral silhouette from all directions

Reflection is foolish enough to not to hide my trails of dried tear
Openly showed my feelings crystal clear  to all far and near

Rains receded, came sun-shine, bouts of joy in life entered
Doors opened, happy bells rang, smile on my face returned

Stoic shadow still unchanged masked my happy expressions
Guileless reflection copied perfectly my mirth-filled sensations

I realise at this point my wrong verdict favouring my shadow
For reflection is true victor which hid never my feelings in meadow

Pain or pleasure, reflection showed to all the true and real me
Shadow always masked the way I felt letting none to see

One who eclipses and manipulates your feelings, expressions.......
          wise choice is sans second thought to bid adieu to them!
And wisest choice is never leave the one who accepts and 
      lets you express the real you for they are the real gem!!


©Copyright Anulaxmi Nayak,2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2016 1:19:00 PM

Anu, the imagery is beautiful. Well done on passing the message along. I keep close and attached to those who love me for me and don't judge me for a fun poetic name. Like you, today you showed me the true beauty of myself. I thank you for that. Sometimes I forget and get all caught up in the drama going on around this place. Anyways, you have a deep way in sharing your reflection. The flow and rhyme are nicely done. You've given good reason to why, accept the wisest choice. HUGS. ~LINDA~

Anu Nayak
Date: 10/1/2016 2:40:00 AM

Dear Linda, thank you and love you for your beautiful and soothing words, loads of love and hugs, Anu:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/3/2015 6:33:00 PM

An introspective poem that reaches a philosophical thought in depth! Excellent development and expression, dear Anulaxmi! A seven!

Anu Nayak
Date: 12/30/2015 11:49:00 AM

dear Demetrios, thank you so much for your visit and your precious feedback....your words rejuvenate my soul......you are my wise man:)thanks again and sorry for the delayed reply Happy new year in advance ....loads of love, Anu:)

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/31/2015 10:30:00 AM

Again, I am struck by such deep introspective writes you come up with, dear Anu. Captivating couplets. That final two lines captures the real heart of a true and enduring relationship. 7. hugs!

Anu Nayak
Date: 12/30/2015 11:47:00 AM

dearest Kim, thank you so much dear for your visit and precious words:) you have always been my inspiration:)happy new year in advance sorry for my delayed reply.....loads of love and warm hugs, Anu:)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/31/2015 9:45:00 AM

Anulaxmi, a theme of resurection and strength has emerged with wonderful poets like yourself this morning (here in Minnesota) am blessed to have stopped by your sweet, powerful words! jimbo

Anu Nayak
Date: 12/30/2015 11:45:00 AM

dear James, sorry for the delayed reply.....thank you so very much for your invaluable comment:) I appreciate your visit and your precious words....so inspiring they are:)...happy new year 2016 in advance,take care.....love, Anu:)