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The Wink

Saturday finds me on a pew of wishes, haggling among mystic stars for an intercession. As twilight dimmed, I rambled, “Will my love return?” The beams winked. For the Contest: Give Me A Sign 16 May 2015 J. Torrente

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Date: 6/7/2015 7:03:00 PM
Juaneco, congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/6/2015 11:26:00 PM
Juaneco, congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 6/6/2015 1:26:00 PM
wow, this is sure unique. I love it! Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 6/6/2015 10:24:00 AM
lovely imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/21/2015 2:40:00 AM
Endearing poem!
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Date: 5/21/2015 1:47:00 AM
Reminds me of Disney's theme but unique in approach. Got your wish, man!
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