The Wink

Saturday

finds me on a pew

of wishes, haggling among

mystic stars for an intercession.

As twilight dimmed, I rambled,

“Will my love return?”

The beams winked.



For the Contest: Give Me A Sign
16 May 2015
J. Torrente
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:03 PM
Juaneco, congrats on your win! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 11:26 PM
Juaneco, congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT**
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 1:26 PM
wow, this is sure unique. I love it! Congrats in the contest.
Allison Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 10:24 AM
lovely imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Em Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 2:40 AM
Endearing poem!
Sabre Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 1:47 AM
Reminds me of Disney's theme but unique in approach. Got your wish, man!
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