The Window

Why can't I get your attention?
You act like I'm not here
I'm standing right in front of you
I didn't suddenly disappear

You look right through me
Like I don't even exist
Why am I meaningless
And so easily dismissed?

When you call my name
It's so void of emotion
No promises made
Of lasting devotion

I'm nothing more 
Than an invisible soul
An empty space
A window
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Milgate Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 2:42 PM
I like the way you use simple straight language and it comes together so well.
Arteaga Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 11:13 PM
i really appreciate if you could comment my poem Window Sill :D, it think only one person had read it D: your poem is definitively different in thought and concept but a good write.
Mehta Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:57 PM
A nicely expressed thought
Taylor Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 8:48 PM
I can see right through this one Larry!
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